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In a cluttered side street
A deaf, old pianist
Listens to his music
Through his fingers,
Which although gnarled and knobbly
As the rest of his body
Are charged with youth.
His clothing is thread and bare,
His piano has seen better days
But such a sweet melancholy
That touches the hearts
Of those who pass him by
Makes them stop,
Makes them listen for a while.

The sedate, tinkling notes
Are overriding in their gentle way
For a few moments the world pauses to listen
The sun comes out of the cloudy grey
A mother brings her child to the window
A debater holds back what he has to say
Silent crowds jam the street
outside the alleyway
Pilgrims stop by to hear the pianist play.

The notes fade into silence…
Then return
Their song is a quiet sigh
The artist’s call
To tell the truth
Embedded in a private lie.
©2008-2009 ~AzraelDarkAngel540
:iconazraeldarkangel540:

Author's Comments

I was inspired by the soundtrack of Letters from Iwo Jima, this has become my favourite poem now.

I give permission to the club :iconkeepers-of-dreams: and :iconthewrittenrevolution: to display this poem in their gallery.

Feel free to comment as you like, I am particularly interested in what you have to say about my handling of the theme..

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:iconsamkaiba:
very nice... its different from the others...though dark it holds a fond sentiment... you can not but not close your eyes and picture the pianist and feel some pity for not having met him in his youth. Keep it up!

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[b]The only reason people hold on to memories is because they are the only thing that won't change when everything else does....[/b]
:iconazraeldarkangel540:
thanks dear :-) :hug:

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"All the world's a stage,
and all the men and women merely players:
they have their exits and their entrances;
and one man in his time plays many parts..."

— (William Shakespeare, As You Like It, 2/7)
:iconsoiden:
Very touching, interesting and emotive. I like it, a lot.

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Seven | The Prologue - [link]
Minti: 'What's that huge Shuriken in your back?' Rida: 'It's the instrument of my Requiem for You.'
Orgulloso Miembro de la comunidad ~viva-chile
:iconazraeldarkangel540:
thanks! :-)

--
"All the world's a stage,
and all the men and women merely players:
they have their exits and their entrances;
and one man in his time plays many parts..."

— (William Shakespeare, As You Like It, 2/7)
:iconspiritwriterssong:
My goodness...It's not often I find poetry on dA I like...But this was amazing, albeit simple. :)
(A pianist myself, I love it all the more. <3 )
Great work~

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:alien:
Time flies like an arrow; Fruit flies like a banana.
~~~~
Come away O human child
To the waters and the wild
With a fairy hand in hand
For the world's more full of weeping
Than you can understand.
~Stolen Child
:iconazraeldarkangel540:
thank you very much for your comment :-)

--
"All the world's a stage,
and all the men and women merely players:
they have their exits and their entrances;
and one man in his time plays many parts..."

— (William Shakespeare, As You Like It, 2/7)
:iconspiritwriterssong:
No problem~ :D

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:alien:
Time flies like an arrow; Fruit flies like a banana.
~~~~
Come away O human child
To the waters and the wild
With a fairy hand in hand
For the world's more full of weeping
Than you can understand.
~Stolen Child
:iconazraeldarkangel540:
:-)

--
"All the world's a stage,
and all the men and women merely players:
they have their exits and their entrances;
and one man in his time plays many parts..."

— (William Shakespeare, As You Like It, 2/7)
:iconlanaxx:
I am stunned, x_x you seem to write a lot lately :D

awsome
:iconazraeldarkangel540:
yeah my muse is raging at the moment... thanks as always :hug:

--
"All the world's a stage,
and all the men and women merely players:
they have their exits and their entrances;
and one man in his time plays many parts..."

— (William Shakespeare, As You Like It, 2/7)

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